Kamis, 13 Mei 2010

Contoh Hortatory Exposition

Hortatory Exposition

Example 1 :

Many reasons why we should keep the existence of fresh water.(THESIS)

As we know that a lot of people in Indonesia are deficiency of fresh water for their daily needed. Nowadays it is difficult to find water.
There are many reasons of water deficiency, such as, almost people throw rubbish into river, road, and everywhere. And there are many housing estates in foot of mountain and the side of river. they do these without thinking about their loss from their actions.
And in fact, now in Indonesia many disasters happened, such as flood, landslide, deficiency of water, etc. If the rivers are full of rubbish, they will stop the circulation of water and flood will happen. If the paddy growing areas change into housing estates, the people who live around that areas in the long run will deficiency of water.(ARGUMENT)

So, next time when you want to throw rubbish, don't throw them into river, lake, road, or everywhere, but you must throw them into the available trash bin. And if you or your parents have land in foot of mountain, don't sell it to housing estates contractor. And the last, if you want to make your own house, please don't make it/them in the side of river and remember all those little reasons for keeping the existence of fresh water.(RECOMMENDATION)

Example 2 :

Removing Lead from Petrol

In all the discussion over the removal of lead from petrol (and the atmosphere) there doesn’t seem to have been any mention of the difference between driving in the city and the country.

While I realize my leaded petrol car is polluting the air wherever I drive, I feel that when you travel through the country, where you only see the another car every five to ten minutes, the problem is not as severe as when traffic is concentrated on city roads.

Those who want to penalize older, leaded petrol vehicles and their owners don’t seem to appreciate that, in the country, there is no public transport to fall back upon and one’s own vehicle is the only way to get about.

I feel that the country people, who often have to travel huge distances to the nearest town and who already spend a great deal of money on petrol, should be treated differently to the people who live in the city.

Generic Structure Analysis
Thesis; paragraph 1
Arguments 1; paragraph 2
Argument 2; paragraph 3
Recommendation; paragraph 4

Language Feature Analysis
Focusing on the writer: using the first personal pronoun “I”
Using abstract noun; discussion
Using action verb: treat,
Using thinking verb; think, seem
Using passive voice; should be treated differently
Using simple present tense; there doesn’t seem…, there is no public transport.., etc

Keutamaan Orang Beriman

1. Diangkat derajat dan dimuliakan
2. Diampuni dosa
3. Diberi rezeki yang barokah
4. Dilimpahkan rahmat dari langit dan bumi
5. Dilindungi Allah
6. Dijauhkan dari bencana
7. Diteguhkan kedudukan
8. Diberi ketenangan jiwa
9. Diberi kegembiraan
10. Dimasukkan kedalam surga
11. Dilimpahi pahala
12. Dilindungi Allah
13. Diberi kekuatan
14. Mendapat pertolongan Allah
15. Mendapatkan keamanan

7 Keotentikan Al-Qur'an

1. Al-Qur'an turun dikalangan Bangsa Arab yang terkenal buta huruf tetapi ingatannya kuat

2. Masyarakat Arab dikenal dengan masyarakat yang hidup bersahaja/sederhana, sebagai masyarakat memiliki waktu luang untuk mempertajam hafalannya

3. Al-Qur'an memiliki gaya bahasa yang indah, sehingga sering di perlombakan

4. Al-Qur'an memiliki gaya bahasa yang indah, sehingga orang kafir sering nguping/mendengarkan ketika dibaca

5. Al-Qur'an turun sebagai jawaban, teguran, peringatan terhadap berbagai peristiwa saat itu

6. Rosulullah SAW banyak memotivasi umat islam agar selalu banyak menghafal Al=Qur'an

7. Al-Qur'an diturunkan secara berangsur-angsur turunnya, sehingga mudah untuk dihafal dan dipahami.

Kedudukan Kitab-kitab Allah S.W.T

1. Sebagai pedoman hidup yang mengatur hubungan antara manusia dengan tuhannya

2. Sebagai pedoman hidup yang mengatur hubungan antara manusia dengan dirinya sendiri

3. Sebagai pedoman hidup yang mengatur hubungan antara manusia dengan sesamanya

4. Sebagai pedoman hidup yang mengatur hubungan antara manusia dengan lingkungannya

Tingkatan Hacker

1.Elite

Ciri-ciri :
mengerti sistem operasi luar dalam, sanggup mengkonfigurasi & menyambungkan jaringan secara global, melakukan pemrogramman setiap harinya, effisien & trampil, menggunakan pengetahuannya dengan tepat, tidak menghancurkan data-data, dan selalu mengikuti peraturan yang ada. Tingkat Elite ini sering disebut sebagai 'suhu'.

2.Semi Elite

Ciri-ciri :
lebih muda dari golongan elite, mempunyai kemampuan & pengetahuan luas tentang komputer, mengerti tentang sistem operasi (termasuk lubangnya), kemampuan programnya cukup untuk mengubah program eksploit.

3.Developed Kiddie

Ciri-ciri :
umurnya masih muda (ABG) & masih sekolah, mereka membaca tentang metoda hacking & caranya di berbagai kesempatan, mencoba berbagai sistem sampai akhirnya berhasil & memproklamirkan kemenangan ke lainnya, umumnya masih menggunakan Grafik User Interface (GUI) & baru belajar basic dari UNIX tanpa mampu menemukan lubang kelemahan baru di sistem operasi.

4.Script Kiddie

Ciri-ciri :
seperti developed kiddie dan juga seperti Lamers, mereka hanya mempunyai pengetahuan teknis networking yang sangat minimal, tidak lepas dari GUI, hacking dilakukan menggunakan trojan untuk menakuti & menyusahkan hidup sebagian pengguna Internet.

5.Lammer

Ciri-ciri :
tidak mempunyai pengalaman & pengetahuan tapi ingin menjadi hacker sehingga lamer sering disebut sebagai 'wanna-be' hacker, penggunaan komputer mereka terutama untuk main game, IRC, tukar menukar software prirate, mencuri kartu kredit, melakukan hacking dengan menggunakan software trojan, nuke & DoS, suka menyombongkan diri melalui IRC channel, dan sebagainya. Karena banyak kekurangannya untuk mencapai elite, dalam perkembangannya mereka hanya akan sampai level developed kiddie atau script kiddie saja.

Pengertian Hacker dan Cracker

> Hacker

Hacker adalah sebutan untuk orang atau sekelompok orang yang memberikan sumbangan bermanfaat untuk dunia jaringan dan sistem operasi, membuat program bantuan untuk dunia jaringan dan komputer.Hacker juga bisa di kategorikan perkerjaan yang dilakukan untuk mencari kelemahan suatu system dan memberikan ide atau pendapat yang bisa memperbaiki kelemahan system yang di temukannya.

> Cracker

Sedangkan cracker adalah sebutan untuk orang yang mencari kelemahan system dan memasukinya untuk kepentingan pribadi dan mencari keuntungan dari system yang di masuki seperti: pencurian data, penghapusan, dan banyak yang lainnya.

Contoh Text Spoof

Penguin in the Park

Once a man was walking in a park when he across a penguin. He took it to a policeman and said; "What should I do?" The policeman replied; "Take it to the zoo!".

The next day, the policeman saw the man in the same park. The man was still carrying the penguin. The policeman was rather surprised and walked up to the man and asked; "Why are you still carrying the penguin? Didn't you take it to the zoo?" The man replied; "I certainly did. And it was a great idea because the penguin really enjoyed it. So, today I am taking it to the movie".


Generic Structure Analysis

Orientation;introducing participants: "He" and Penguin. They were in the park
Event1; The man tended to take the penguin to the park
Event; The following day, the man were still carrying the penguin
Twist; Even, finally the man would take the penguin to the movies
Language Feature Analysis
Focusing on certain certain participants; He, penguin, policeman
Using action verb; carry, walk up
Using adverb of time and place; once, in the park
Told in chronological order; chronological order by days, the next day.


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Abu Nawas and the King Aaron

The king wanted to test Abu Nawas’ smartness. So he invited Abu Nawas to the palace. “You want me, your Majesty?” greeted Abu Nawas. “Yes, you have fooled me three times and that’s too much. I want you to leave the country. Otherwise you will have to go to jail” said the king. “If that is what you want, I will do what you said” said Abu Nawas sadly. Then “Remember, from tomorrow you may not step on the ground of this country anymore” the king said seriously. Then Abu nawas left the king palace sadly.
The following morning the king ordered his two guards to go to Abu Nawas’ house. The guards were very surprised found Abu Nawas still in his house. He had not left the country yet. Instead leaving the country, Abu Nawas was swimming in small pool in front of his house. “Hey Abu Nawas, why haven’t you left this country yet? The king ordered you not to step on the ground of this country anymore, didn’t he?” said the guards. “Sure he did” answered Abu Nawas calmly. “But look at me! Do I step on the ground of this country? No, I do not step on the ground. I am swimming on the water” continued Abu Nawas.
The guards were not able to argue with Abu Nawas so they left Abu Nawas’ house and went back to the palace. The guards reported what they had seen to the king. The king was curious on Abu Nawas’ excuse not to leave the country. Therefore the king ordered his guard to call Abu Nawas to come to the palace.
Abu Nawas came to the palace on stilts. The king wondered and said “Abu, I will surely punish you because you haven’t done what I have said. You have not left this country”. The King continued “And now, look at you. You walk on stilts like a child. Are you crazy? The king pretended to be furious.

“I remember exactly what you said, Your Majesty” Abu Nawas answered calmly. “This morning I took a bath in the small pool in my house so that I had not to step on the ground. And since yesterday, I have been walking on this stilts. So you see, Your Majesty, I do not step on the ground of this country”. The king was not able to say anything.

Generic Structure Analysis
Orientation: Introducing Abu Nawas and the King on the counteracts about leaving and staying in the country
Event 1: Abu Nawas was swimming on the pool
Event 2: Abu Nawas was walking on the stilts
Twister: Abu Nawas explained that swimming in the pool and walking on the stilts meant not stepping on the ground of the country.


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Nasreddin’s Coat

One day Nasreddin had been invited to the dinner party. He went to the party by wearing old clothes.
When he arrived in the party, nobody looked at him and nobody gave him a seat. He got no food in the party so he went home and change his clothes
Next he put on his best clothes. He wore his newest coat and went to the party again. The host at once got up and came to meet him. The host offered him the best table and gave him a good seat and served him the best food

Nasreddin sat and put off his coat. He put his coat and said; “Eat the food, Coat!” the hosts and guests were very surprised and asked Nareddin; “What are doing?” Nasreddin replied calmly; “When I came here with my old clothes, nobody looked at me. Then I went home and put on my best clothes. I came back in my newest coat and you all give me this best food and drink. So, you give food to my coat instead of me”. Getting Nasreddin's answer, they just shook the head.

Generic Structure Analysis
Orientation: one day, Nasreddin was invited to a dinner party
Event 1: He was in the party with his old cloth
Event 2: He was in the party with his best newest coat
Twist: Among the hosts and guests, he aske his coat to eat the served food.

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